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I really liked this story because it seemed to be written out step-by-step. It was easy to see the characters doing what the author was describing and the imagery was well developed. I feel like the story would be used for a play or something because of the descriptions and how dead on each move a character makes is immediately pointed out. The part where Jeffery is telling his jokes made me laugh. I like it when characters can laugh at themselves and then make the readers laugh as well. All in all i enjoyed this story very much.

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