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Toastmaster

I liked how throughout this whole story it sounded like it was being narrarated by a child. The voice fit the character. I could really get a feel for the full character of not only Jeffery, but also Dar. Jefferey just seems like the most adorable kid! He shows traits of being observant when he describes all of the other tables, and intelligence when he notes all of his vocabulary words. Also, I liked the concept of having a group of people getting together just to tell random jokes. It seems so simple yet fun as a plot. When Jeffery runs up infront of everybody to tell his dyslex joke, I actually laughed out loud. The ability to follow his development and interest of this comedic lifestyle was interesting and made for a really cute story.

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